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Firstly, my critique is divided into two parts: an irrelevant part that you can largely ignore, and the substantial part, which you may read and absorb if you wish.
The irrelevant part has to do with your subject matter. Being a Classicist, I do notice the absence of a beard on Poseidon, and that he is a bit scrawny. But that is, as I said, irrelevant to the matter at hand, but I felt I should express my puritan up-stuck-ness somewhere
Now for the relevant part. Overall, a subtle render of the subject. Its not flashy, and does not need to be, as the characters' poses convey the message by themselves. The only small flaw I find is Amphitrite's gaze... she does not seem to be focusing on anything in the picture, which can be distracting to the viewer, whereas Poseidon is clearly adoring his Queen. The unique characterisation is successful, I think. A very bishonen interpretation of the Greek god, but if interpreted in this light, succeeds. The subtle contrast of skin tones against each other is very nice. The only thing I fault in the colour scheme is the trident. I feel the black and red don't fit in with the rest. Perhaps a bronze would have suited better, to reflect Poseidon's skin tone (and the fact that his trident would have been Bronze, at least in the Iliadic times). Finally, excellent use of texture. The characters are brought alive by the careful attention to skin texture, combined with the aging of the bowl/disc in which the picture stands.
That's my 5 cents worth... tell me if I'm being pretentious
Hmm, I see what you mean about her line of sight, didnt notice it until you mentioned it tho. Dont see how I could change that without having to redo her head, since it's the angle of her head that creates the problem. For the most part, I think it's ok.
As to the tident *goes and double clicks on the photoshop icon, preparing to take Fluffie's advice and change the colour*
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Thanks for the entry and good luck in the contest. <3
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What you could do is simply make her eyes look down, not her head. It will make her look demure, and draw the attention more to the seashell a bit.
Nothing else to really add to the volumes of compliments about the pic. As soon as ou figure out character positioning there'll be nothing the rest of us can say anymore
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